Aug 052012
Friends or Foe,
i leave that to you to decide.
with the countless times you did lie to me, friends or foe?
How u neglect me in times of trouble, friends or foe?
stealing from me unceasingly, friends or foe?
stab me in the back and laugh in my face, friends or foe?
Foe, definitely.
wow, i cant remember something this, i had it saved up in my draft because it was unfinished.
Posting** sorry “something” was a slip
They published such a brief poem?uncategorised as flash?so much for 200 words.
Definitely friend.
Keep your drafts on your fone or PC next time.
Foe
I wont say much about this because you said it was an unfinished draft, but even as it is, It would have been beautiful if properly arranged.
Friends or Foe,
i leave that to you to decide.
With the countless times
You did lie to me;
Friends or foe?
How you neglect me
In times of trouble;
Friends or foe?
Stealing from me
Unceasingly;
Friends or foe?
Stab me in the back
And laugh in my face;
Friends or foe?
Keep writing and you’ll get better and better.