Aug 262012
A pillar upon which the spirit of beliefs are built
That makes the heart roam freely without guilt
Blowing the winds of an unflinching believe in God
Making even every odd
A solemn bridge that leads to the divine realm
Reflecting an highly spirited but invisible beam
In total submission of a doubtless state
Gliding gently towards heaven’s gate
The depth of your faith decides your fate
In a world of stakes but nothing to bait
Where exists only two choices
Better believe in God than seek other sources.
@alfa2 A poetic sermon. Intresting.
hmmn, made some sense.
Lovely
MFL: Making even every odd
The ending sounds incomplete to me
The poem could benefit from landscaping -what do you think?
Great message. Good Work!
without faith you can’t please God- great work
Faith… Not the easiest of things to have…