She laughed violently when he beamed her a smile
She laughed again when he penned his words
Through his eyes she saw his heart
She laughed more at his tawdry remark- you are beautiful
She laughed at the lies he backed into sandwich
With a glance she knew his mind
She let out a barrel- it hardly counted anymore
She laughed his irritation away
If only he knew she carried a trigger in her head
She laughed once more at his sugary lips
Which dripped of all the lies from hell,
His watery eyes concealing his lust
She laughed at the effrontery of the dude
Wondering how many frogs he had kissed
Hazarding the cost of his cheapie moccasin
She laughed again like a volcano spurting fire
She laughed and laughed until he stood up to leave
Oblivious of the boner announcing his mission
© Shittu Fowora 2012
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Really nice lines.
I like the flow
Nice poem. Nifty words used well. I was asking if she was clairvoyant untill I encountered “boner”.
Nice lines, although the diction was a little ‘hard’ for my ‘unliterary’ mind.
Thanx Anzaa, ‘Unliterary’? you are kidding. Kaycee,Chem,Magic, Obisike, I appreciate you all for the comments.
I laugh with her. Men! We can be so predictable. Good piece
Reminds me of one of Afroman’s song
Weirdpile, what song is that?
Lovely ending Writefight.
well done!!!
Blatant truth brutally expressed!
Love it! You rendered a subtle simple moment with such tender poetic violence.
But then the poem since to have no correlation with the title. Am I missing something?
Well, if you’ve been in the shoes of an uninterested lady, listening on as a smoothie reels out his lines at her, then you may just understand why the title is that. If you have a better title suggestion, i dont mind. Bring it on. Thanks
Nice rhymes. Your delivery was articulate and you lead your readers well to the end. But I also agree with @Afronuts on the title. Well done all the same.
Oh now I understand why you choose this title.. I know you get this alot but good job!
@Writefight: IT IS A JOKE!
Now I’m off to read it… lol