Jul 232012
When you recount those words,
I startle
Words that grit my bowel
When you say no word,
I marvel
When you stride that lane
And twitch those eyes at an angle,
I giggle
‘cos I want to hear more
And get the very core
Of all you saw
In the land of the poor
Of all you heard
In the time of war
‘cos I want to hear more
Of how you hid amidst cadavers
Munching half-done cassava
To survive
© Shittu Fowora 2012


Respect!
lovely but could do with some fleshing out… just my 2 kobo
More to this than meet the eyes.
Tell, the tale especially the mode of the writer.
Respect!
Good one!
serious respect oh! you are a master of written verse…i am going to just read all your stuff and start doing copycopy oh!
Thank you to everyone who dropped a word or two. Now, you- sunshine, take two hugs. Share here or inbox me what ya think i could add to that. You know how i so much like to distill some brew from the deep of sagely reservoirs . Looking forward.