Happiness hit her
sweet cries covered the earth
she beheld a beauty like never before
in its eyes laid the smile of a fiery sun
when it smiled,the goddess of beauty bowed at its feet
OH! what child is this
She laid on cranky paper bed
pain set her ablaze
ONE TOUCH,pain fled
the world and all its nick nacks stood still
Tiny fingers of tears clenched her heart
OH! what child is this!
It held her,
earth dissolved in wavy emotions
peppery, sparkly dust stung her eyes
She let that great river flow from those eyes
She had bore a seed
OH! what child was this?
Joy overwhelmed her,
peace so much the whole of SYRIA worshiped
all of the planets sang their praise
sun, moon and stars nodded in acceptance
finally she was a life keeper
OH! that child,was hers
all fours interlocked
then she took an oath,one of protection
she built a hedge round it
her love compelled the gods of war to take theirs too
she had shamed laughing lips,
had cursed the roots of angry kinsmen
OH!…what child was this?


“She lain (lay) on cranky paper bed”
The world and all its nick nacks (knick-knacks)”
“She had bore a seed”(borne)
If its not about Jesus Christ, then I don’t understand.
errmm..well I was trying to mix to things together. so it clearly didn’t work..thanks for checking anyways
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ok thank you I will check
Don’t understand…