Jul 022012
How do you wait
At least 3 years
For a possible soul mate
But have no fears
For you, I open my gate
And wish that you were here
But you live in another state
Yet another reason to fear
But I fear because I care
And I care because I love you
It’s a kind of love that is rare
And shared by very few
My love, in every form, is undying
For me losing you is would like dying
You are a gift greater than everything
And for you, I’ll do anything
I’ll wait for you, over these next few years
And together we’ll overcome our greatest fears
Written by Iroko Reborn
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Ndaba @starrider
I am a published writer, former National Arts Merit Awards (NAMA) nominee, a writers` association chairperson, an English lecturer, an international ESL and EFL teacher and tutor , book editor ,conference producer and researcher. In 2005, my nationally acclaimed book, Love O’clock was published. In 2006, I edited a poetry anthology, IT`S TIME…In 2007 I was in a team of young writers` editors/mentors on a British council project, Echoes of the Young. 2010 saw me contribute to an international edition -Poems for Haiti, a South African anthology. In 2012 l contributed to the following international poetry collections, SNIPPETS and Voices For Peace respectively.Go to Ndaba's profile, and read more of his/her posts.
You did good with this.
“For me losing you is would like dying”.
check that.
Thanks, for alerting me to that error of omission.
i like this very much,
. Bravo!
i wish the last stanza had four lines like the rest though…
Lovely piece realky, simple and sweet.
errr, one more thing try to use a consistent rhyme scheme , the firt three stanza’s were abab and the fourth was aaaa.
i think being consistent would read better, just my thoughts though.