Jun 142012
Despite lessons learned over time
Rebirth to me
Still feels like a crime
My spirit grieves the attachment it feels
The earth
With its attractions bring
A life full of many distractions
My attachment a casualty of dissatisfaction
Oh! What sad day!
My ignorance betrayed.
My ignorance ponders the choice of rebirth
The good they say die young
Evil lives too long
A secret the universe shares with only those who belong
Insights to this world’s grieving…
If a seed can grow into a tree…
Death in reverse is living
Rebirth in this finds its reason
Were those evil to die more
To the world more evil would flow and grow
Grace, it is, that answers us … Great reflection you have here …
What about rebirth as second chances?
My question eggsackly?
That last line is cast in Iron, but is it always so?
Nice piece @aturmercy
Av read a coupla ur oda works, u doing gud.
Meanwhile, ds rebirth thingy….d whole essence would be to redo all wrongs done, yeah? It’s like having second chances….my thots though.
Make we reflect am small.
Very thoughtful, I enjoyed it.
Hmmm. Thought-provoking.