Against Our Will

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Jun 162012
 

Even when we do not want to play
We get a crashing jerk at their crabby jokes
And with the sheer abandon with mere objects
Get kicked off with their rolling feet

Even when we do not want to smile
We find our lips stretching far beyond their breath;
The effect of a menacing prior threat
And a cruel prodding from behind to do so

Even when we do not want to cry
We feel the tears flowing generously down
As their nails dig deep into our flesh
Searing life-ending pain through us

Even when we do not want to talk
We find the words rolling unrestrictedly out
Like gushes from damaged outlets
To express wearing out griefs

Even when we do not want to die
We find ourselves laden in air traps
Like stacks of test animals
About to be ferried along coast regions

And then when we’re gone
I mean gone never to return again
Like jolting bolts our demise awaken them
To their most ‘honourable’ jobs

Sadly all we get in turn
Is tears shed at our sides
Visits paid at our sites
Libation poured on our graves
Condolences signed on our names
Compensations paid on our lives
Vows made on our spirits
To never make this happen next time

But just like all other facts
Their vain acts are against our will
For there’ll still be a next time
Which like ours will come and go
With more stones laid face down
And more hearts left to bleed
With nothing else left to remember us
Than slowly slipping dates

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  25 Responses to “Against Our Will”

  1. OMG….. This is touching. True words you spoke @babyada.

  2. Cool….not intense enuf for me o. Though the message is crystal clear and in dt is d strength n weapon of ds Piece!

  3. Good piece…

  4. @babyada…simple words convey the clearest messages, this did just that!

  5. Indeed they do….

  6. deep message…

    well done!

  7. True words

    True Poetry

    Truly written

    Truly felt!

    Good job @babyada

  8. This is very nicely spoken, great words communicating so much. Thank u for this.

  9. Gud piece.

  10. gbosa! gbosa!! gbosa!!!to the great poet of our time

  11. Concise… wish there was a better word to summarize all I’ve got to say; conclusively, I like this. We really do a lot under duress. We are just made to “shut up and drive.”

    “I mean gone never to [return again]”
    I think those words placed together amount to tautology. Except poetic licence permits it, the “again” is better done without.

    @babyada, well done.

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