May 032012
I reach out
and you incline
towards me in
ardent pleasing motion
Like a bird
on the calm breeze
of early morn
the nearness of you
warms me
your arms close
around my delicate form
and i in blissfull
greed
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emilyonikaba @shewhoisloved
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No long thing.
Just like a hug. But can leave forever in the memory…
Nice one.
Yaay! Thanks Seun .One of my favourite things to do in this world is to hug someone, its a beautiful thing.
Simple and impressionable.
Thanks Sontel.
@shewhoisloved
Nice..
The imagery this etched on my mind was that of a baby reaching out to its mother to be carried.
Thanks.
I agree with @Afronuts. There is beauty in simplicity.
Thank you so much RIO.
I need a hug right now… Nice poem.
thank you#hugs#
Nice and straight to the point. Well done
Thank you Leekwid
Soothing Emily, like hot chicken soup on a cold rainy day. I just hugged myself.
Awww, Dottaraphels thank you.
Simple and cool
Gracias adaobiokwy
Simply cool…There’s a poem I came across titled ‘Why God made hugs’…yours is quite like it…Well done Emily…$ß
simply beautiful.
simply beautiful.
Kayceeee!!! Thank you.
@emily,simple things are beautiful,just like a hug and a poem well written…nice one.
@ogbole, i love your comment. Thank you.
Very simple!!!! Very memorable.
@gretel,i am glad you think its memorable. #big hug#
I tell you, an honest hug is one of the most beautiful things!
@Myne, very beautiful indeed Myne! Thank you.
succinct, you nailed it kpakam…
Nice one!
@elly, #big smile#
Hugging! E fi ra yin le jo.
Ahn ahn…its good to hug joor
iLike…
@raymond, me too