MAN:
It is true that love is like sweet wine, the taste lingers till its time to dine.
It is true that love doesn’t cost a dime, it could come more than once in a lifetime.
It is true that love is as pure as a dove, as white as snow.
It is true that the feeling of love, is something good to know.
Yes, I have tasted it, it is good to know.
Since its true that love is as sacred as life in its glory days,
since its as fierce as a hot burning furnace.
Then I’ll love you till I reach my resting place,
till my skin touches the earth’s dusty surface.
Till I reach the 6feet hollow.
Your heart, mine will always follow.
Will you Marry Me?
WOMAN:
Should it be love or d feeling of songs,
that which makes me sway to d sound of gongs.
Should it be love that feels so strong,
dont think I’m doing anything wrong.
Yes, That which lasts for so long,
It could never be go wrong.
The feeling that carries me higher than the birds,
makes me walk tall among heads.
It gives me assurance that you are d best,
that I’m your one and only first.
I put you to the test,
You came out better than the rest.
Whether its love or the way you made me feel,
when before me I saw you kneel.
Asking for me to be your queen,
either way it was better than the 3course meal.
I’ll think of your proposal.
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They were originally two different poems, but I tried to mix them. I’m not so sure, I’ll love to hear what you guys think.
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I think it works better together…Nice lines…Well done…$ß.
I ditto @sibbylwhyte. It’s a good poem…
I ditto @sibbylwhyte. It’s a nice poem.
Keep writing…
Yo Woman beta think fast and think positive.dont keep d man waiting.
Nice conjunction!
Kinda dramatic poem.
@sibbylwhyte. Thanks dear. I’m happy you like it.
@Lancaster Yea thank you, I will keep on writing.
@Osondu G O thanks. You know women can be crazy, she might still say No. Even after the poem.
Woman! U are too cautious, why not plunge in and take a risk with a great guy lol. U can see how much you carried me along. Nice one.
“I’ll think about your proposal’ *yimu*
Dey dere dey think…Ifunayas plenty around. E go jus’ follow anoda one waka!
Nice one dearie.
@chinyerechimodo its a lifetime we are talking about here. Lol thanks.
@Seun-Odukoya I don’t think her name is Ifunanya jor. Her name is Nma, are there many girls like me? Lol :p
Thanks boo.
Actually I wouldn’t know. Are there?
No comment. //_O
You want me to beg??
Ok.
Put that way, *yes*, make we marry…but wait, you be woman na…I no marry again.
Well done.
i first heard ifunanya from P square is that the one u are referring to? lol just kidding- good piece of poetry keep it up
…So all the time wey una dey friend, U no sabi whether U go like spend d rest of ya life with am o_O?
Happy thinking then.
Nice.
“It could never be go wrong….” Small error…