I was lost, desperate and losing faith
To find peace at any cost, throw off this weight
Much more than man can give cos he is weak
I sought, he ‘ll never be able to give what i seek
The deal I made eternally holds me bound
Enslaved by my will, my soul no where to be found
The fury of my breathe, the burning rage of hell
Look in my eyes, yet another story to tell
A deal that took breath out of me
Left a whole where my heart use to be
I ‘m fighting hard, hoping I can make it through
Strange enough, I am death to you
I sought relief pills couldnt give
I sought refuge, everywhere kept screaming ‘leave!’
I sought peace, But in the wrong places
I sought a new deal, but from strange faces
Its not the stunts that offered relief
Its not the sacrifices, my endless belief
Its not my justification or pardon for my sins
Neither the pleasure of vengeance, or my numerous wins
I found The feeling that struck the balance
The good underneath the rust, a second chance
The light the darkness managed to suppress
A new path, to make amends for my mess
A discerning thought, a defined choice
The mischievous and the quiet voice
The cry for revenge and a forgiving spirit
Condemn and redeemed, my spirit can feel all of it
So with the same hands I stretch to kill
I ‘ll channel redemption, I ll heal
Though conflicting, night and day work as a team
Even the devil can’t deny there’s no good in him
Your are beginning to get too confident and post rubbish.
Good poets don’t just write poems because they feel they can.
This poem would embarrass you years to come.
Hahahahahahahahahhahahaha!….rubbish? Lmao! If you say so after watching the movie, then I d be alarmed at you!@ kaycee
All my posts are usually thought-centred…story like or narative. I only expressed what the ghost rider felt all movie long and it in a way has a moral lesson for every one to learn
Embarrass M̶̲̥̅ε̲̣̣̣̥, in years to come……okay o! And a good poet expresses thoughts, anytime, anywhere, anyhow……….=))º°˚˚˚°ºнaĦaнaº°˚˚˚°º=))
I would take the time to watch the movie. Saw the trailer once, with what I saw, ur poem did justice to the ghost rider…Well done…$ß.
Condemn[ed] and redeemed, my spirit can feel all of it
So with the same hands I stretch[ed] to kill
I think the above amendments are necessary but I love your poem, movie or no movie. Well done.
A few typos… I see what U did…Nice translation of the movie…
Wonderful piece. Although I couldn’t get the full gist.
if you think a write up is nonsense- remove the non and you will see the sense. i don’t know anything about poetry but i always respect people who write poems- so well done and keep writing.