Apr 202012
Questions coming from every corner,
but not a single answer coming from an angle.
I feel like if i shed tears,
i would cry an ocean.
And if i cry an ocean,
this pain would be washed away.
I feel like i shed not tears,
but blood.
Even so,
not a single tear fall from my eye,
i cry the ocean of blood in my heart,
but the excrutiation seem not to make a difference.
What is wrong with me?
Yet another answerless question.
Now i know how it would feel like to be alone in this world.
As i decend from the greatest height i have known,
for a zillion hour my feet have still not graced the ground.
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I feel like the title is too separated from the poem itself. Good poem…but the title does not capture it.
Ever listened to ‘Questions’ by GQ/’Questions’ by Asa?
Nice.
There is pain in this, and there are some good lines.. but this needs reworking. I think it’s too loose, the depression of the poet doesn’t hurt us enough..
I didn’t feel enough of your hurt and bewilderment as i read this, no offence meant…it’s just me i guess..Well done all the same…$ß
well dne. good poem. wat are u asking about or for?
I never double-checked the poem.thanks for the comments,now i would pick up my pen and make some touches,including the title
Okay. Try to edit next time before posting sha. It is really important. Well done.