Still feel the same after all this time
Still the one loving Isn’t a crime
Still my baby, my heart and my all
Still the one i always yield her call
Still the one i want to be with
Still the girl i want to sweep off her feet
Still the one that tickles my fancy
Still the one i always long to see
Still the one i think of and smile
Still worthy of my walking a thousand mile
Still the apple of my eye
Still the one i ‘ll never make cry
Still the one i can’t stay mad at
Still the one i hold dear in my heart
Still the one i find easy to forgive
Still the one i ‘ll love and never leave
Still the one i run to
Still my counsel and comfort in times of trouble
Still the truth in this world filled with lies
Still assured just looking in your eyes
Still the one i love to kiss
Still your touch i don’t want to miss
Still the one i want to make love to
Still respect your body, i still do
Still miss you when you re not around
Still will seek you until you re found
Still a part of me i can’t let go
Still my love to you want to show
Still my val, the reason Am in love
Still my Angel, the girl am very proud of
Still loving you, whether alive and when am gone
Still my future wife, you re still the one
Still making me comment on this stuff
Still wondering why I sound so gruff
Still…okay you try sha but…
Still improve your style some more!
Nice.
Lol. Well said. Better still, well laid out!
The long awaited Still from the ‘Love Poet’..
Yeah bright it is a lovely poem,..
Just keep penning the lines that makes many a heart stop still…Hehe..
Well done…
Still wondering why am nt just impressed with this……Still thinking….maybe i wil know later…..u try sha
Still wondering why you act hard to impress
hahahahahahahahaha….just exploiting some ‘still’…not a good pattern shey? *sob*
@Bright Benson Still loving it all the same!
Don’t sob joor!
Not bad, but not excellent either.
It’s okay.
The use of ‘still’ in all the lines took away something. Wish you had used the ‘still’ somehow *i dunno how to explain it* . The poem is cool sha but I prefer your other poems.
It sounds more like the lyrics of a song and though it’s nice, the constant repetition of “still” doesn’t make me flow with this poem. So I agree with @obi onyinye anne and @gooseberry on this one.
For once, I thought I was listening to Sania Twain’s ‘Still the One’. All the same, I liked the depth of the poem. Nice one, bro!
Still write more… this is not good enough but it’s okay.