In your eyes is mystical brightness
Light balls shining in its hallow chambers
Sending love’s messages to a soul- dying,
Calling that heart weak to hear a faint sound
Casting a spell, bounded with love fetters
In your smile is unimaginable passion
Rays of hope, promise of paradise
Sorrow overcomer, the light bringer
Beauty wrapped in faultless curves
Wonder shapes Angels only bear
In your touch is pains relief,
Passing through nerves, undoing stress,
Spiritual revival of the soul, brains relaxation
Sending messages of mounted passion
And illuminations through the body’s dark frames
In your words are thought of orphic wisdom
Ancient beliefs, spiritual cliff
Soothing aid, greatness spade
Winning paths, protection guides
Strength forever, voice perforating only into me.
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UP NEPA
Seems like a hell
Or a roof of uncivilized sweltering air,
Strolling the atmosphere of our room,
Overheating my mortal frame.
Trouble mosquitoes are fighting this Homo sapiens,
Protesting to get a share of sweet and blood
Contesting with their proboscis.
Opening the window door is worse for
Horrible opposite noise of
I-better-pass- my-neighbour
Hurling beats into my calmed ears
But I hope one day to perceive
Like a child with civil right
Like a citizen of a developing nation
Just aflash of light and shout
Like a remix of Genesis
UP NEPA…
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Not bad. I like the first poem better.
“In You” apotheosizes, and ‘am seriously afraid the subject is no fit for this existence.
If ‘it’ were an angel, then, ‘it’ is immaterial and might not meet the carnality of temporality!
So?
I like the work.
Na wah for you o @ostar.Why not simply say ‘I like the poem’?…………lol.
Lovely poems both.I like ‘into you’ better,especially the language.Do you tend towards the mystical? And in ‘up Nepa’, I like the line ‘like a remix of Genesis’. Good thinking on your part.
Well done!!!
I like the first one.
And the other, not bad.
I Like them both….
I like both….well done