Dec 022011
It’s hard to explain
But I know when his love died
His breathtaking smile
Became a shadow with a haunted look
A promise forgotten
He said he’ll always love me
My lauded humour
Rewarded by the hollowness of his laughter
When love dies
It is hard to be in sync
The same hands
But the touch now repulsive
My words
Infuriated his delicate eardrum, not
Soft answers
Did not turn his wrath way
I still tried
Holding as to eel in slippery hands
In the dark
I wonder if he ever, truly loved
My bleeding heart
The pain still intensifies with each breath
He is gone
Finding love comes easy to him
As I rearrange
The broken pieces of my heart
I’ll be strong
He will come back to me, some day
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tomeloma @tomeloma
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‘Heart break’ Is it the new song of the new millenium? See, you people had better stop it!
I like your poem.
The poem’s good but there’s massive room for improvement
Quite good.
Of course you can always do better.
@tomeloma, Nice one.
Lovely poem here! I this would be better heard in from the likes of celin Dion and Dido.
Nice poem. Just forget about him, jare.
Nice poem. Don’t worry you will have your miracle…
Nice poem but you could have done a lot better in some places especially with the choice of words and rhyming.
I really like your poem. You articulated so well how most of us feel when we lose a love. Very well done.
Okay…
Who told U to have a Glass heart? Not bad…
Thanks all for comments @anderson I’m working on the rhyming now (smiles)