Like a dream
Too good to believe in…
A tale
too long to tell
I preserve forever these memories
your smiles…your eyes …
And oh! The warmth of your embrace.
Like a gift
too precious to lose…
An amulet
too sacred to scorn
I adore eternally these things
your words… your laughter
And oh! The fire of your kisses!
Like a tattoo
too deep to fade…
A fire
too fierce to quench
I hover around seeking
your face…your love
and oh! The joy of you with me again!
Lovely poem, its beauty is in its easy flow and simple lines which resonated passion
Nice poem,it is not your usual style,you sound different,very cheerful.
@ Khadijah, I’m in a cheerful mood because I have found my ‘Candle in the Dark” #mischievous grin#.
@ Anderson, thanks bro
Hmmm, wonder what that candle in the dark is, sounds like something that can come in useful
@ Anderson “Candle in the dark” my burning passion…my zeal, my goal, my sole resolve, with her I mock and taunt my fears!
Simple.
Good poem
chikena!
simple diction. the use of figurative expressions makes the poem graphic. good one!
I love the rhythmic flow of the lines. Good job.
Good poem.
I felt the fire. Nice one :)
Now, this is a poem!
Thanks Kaycee