Love Like This

Love Like This

Loving

the way we bond like James bond

Loving when we fondling the way we fond

Loving
the way when we double O seven

Loving
the way we ascend to heaven

 

Tis like purest love, like crystal water

Tis
like peace dove, sweet this words we utter

Tis
like two vines, as when we entwine

Tis
like when we crush we make cherry wine

 

The
look in your eyes keeps on killing me

The
look like pearls of deep Arabian Sea

The
look romantic like brown chocolate

The
look beautiful, like a pearly gate

 

Love
like this, this is immortality

Love
like this will last for eternity

Love
like this, this is sweeter than honey

Love
like this brings light so sheer and sunny



7 thoughts on “Love Like This” by chisom oji (@chisom)

  1. You didn’t do justice to love with this.

    1. it is meant to have a sensual effectdepicting pleasure. thanx for you comment, it is much appreciated

  2. i totally second @Kaycee…
    this was forced and the ‘Tis’ and all that didn’t help.
    look again at that last line 4 eg…sheer and sunny, really?
    please rework so that i can download

    1. hey! thanx okwy, duly noted, i am gonna work on this provided it touches my heart.

  3. Nice structure, but it felt a bit lacking. And, 007? How? Una dey do ‘War Start’?

  4. thanx Ray, 007 as in james bond actions and escpades with women.

  5. Some lines of this poem were sublime while others were so common. Sweet as honey? That has been overdone. Pearls was also repeated in one verse. That said, romantic that I am, I loved the first two lines of the last part. Thumbs up.

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