Sha’red Moments/ Light Out

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Jul 102011
 

Moments sha’red, through lettered thoughts
Once voiced in ‘mobile’ tunes
Climaxing in a knotting of hearts
And consumated ‘unfaced’ on wall-less book
Are yesterday’s pains but today’s gains.

For our ever present ‘tweets’
Walled on hearts so sweet
However fleeting, are the seeded remains
Of what was, what is and what will be.

LIGHT OUT

Light out…
Dawn like a faulty clock stuck to dusk
As darkness awoke slumber -
Pillowed by nightmarish mares.
We can no longer tell the difference.

Friendly pests, raised a lullaby
Mused by blood-spattered pain;
They joy in glutton’s delight,
Until restless hands put them to sleep.

Yet, the music streamed on.

Light on…
Sight once sane in the shadows,
Now blurred in daylight’s fury.
Day becomes a kind of night
And night, a kind of day,
We can no longer tell the difference.

And as truth begins to take shape
Light out.

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  9 Responses to “Sha’red Moments/ Light Out”

  1. I like both…but the theme of the first one is getting quite…so I prefer the second one.

    Well done.

  2. I prefer the second poem too. Keep it up.

  3. The second poem is also my preference. I liked your use of words, rhyme, repetition, etc.

  4. Nice poems. Well done!!

  5. nice. keep working on your poems.

  6. I enjoyed both. Is this another way of beating the word limit fir entries?

  7. First one was better for me. Enjoyed both though. Felt some kinda magic in the first one. Your name sounds feminine so I hope you do more poems like the first one. Keep it up.

  8. the second is likable…..nice caption……it reminds me of NEPA.

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