Miss You

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May 082011
 

I keep mixing up my tenses
Mistaking my pen for an utensil
Am i lost? I wonder
My mind drifts, my heart wanders
No more can I write
I can’t even manage a smile
I can’t think of dainty sonnets
Or pen down a rhyme
I miss you so
And it hurts my soul
The birds chirp
Mocking my loneliness
The day slowly pass
A bowl of emptiness
Whisper my name
Oh charming beauty
Tell my heart what yours want
And lets come to a love some treaty.

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Anderson Paul @Anderson-paul

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  15 Responses to “Miss You”

  1. Avatar of Raymond
    Raymond @ says:
    May 9, 2011 at 5:28 am

    Small typos, but that doesn’t detract anything from the Beauty of this.

  2. Avatar of xikay
    xikay @ says:
    May 9, 2011 at 7:53 am

    lovely bro. she’ll come around soon. few typos like @raymond said. the lst line for example: love some [LOVESOME/LOVE-SOME]

  3. Avatar of empress sewande
    empress sewande @ says:
    May 10, 2011 at 2:26 am

    awwwww nice nice nice

  4. Avatar of doubleespresso
    doubleespresso @ says:
    May 16, 2011 at 12:38 pm

    I enjoyed this, and as you said in the 1st line being lovesick has perhaps affected your attention to detail (only jesting) …but like in this sentence the want should be wants-Tell my heart what yours want-but must compliment you…good job!

  5. Avatar of irenecarew-bako
    irenecarew-bako @ says:
    June 12, 2011 at 9:27 am

    Beautiful verses. Maybe not talking about a particular someone but the very concept of true love eh? Something tells me that like still waters, you run really deep.

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