Love is recurring habit

Love is recurring habit

I

The sky bowed down

The earth stand still

The ambience is changing

Beloved, you have cast charm on me

My desire is different

My love is crazy

My mind produced your image

My body want to be normal

But my life want a change

Change of heart

This chasm will be bridged

This hollow must be filled

With your passion

 

II

My ego faltered

My confidence has been burnt

My hatred has been altered

Why are you burning inside me?

Why do you change me?

The flowers has been decolorised

My passion has been altered

Why have the flowers possessed your beauty?

Why has my passion revered you?

One glance from you has taken my heart

You have bargained my priceless heart

I am giving you my love ticket

Unending show to my entire world



3 thoughts on “Love is recurring habit” by Akeem Olalekan (@kimolalekan)

  1. Ok oh. Take it easy and dont get too smitten. Lol.

    The work is okay. But please please you have got to do serious editing. The inconsistent tense usage made it hard reading at certain points.

  2. Stan has said it all.

  3. Mr @akeem, e be like say one gal don scatter your head…go on jwor..love and live. you have done well.

    The earth stand still[I THINK IT SHOULD BE STOOD GOING BY THE PAST TENSE IN THE PRECEDING VERSE]

    My body want[WANTS :ITS THE CONTINUOUS TENSE NOT AN ORDER TO THE EARTH ] to be normal

    But my life want[WANTS PRESENT CONTINUOUS?] a change

    I am giving you my love[LOVES?] ticket

    Unending show to[‘OF’ INSTEAD OF ‘TO’? ] my entire world

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