(H)Aiku/ Hi Coup/ High Coo/ Haiku- EPISODES 1-3

(H)Aiku/ Hi Coup/ High Coo/ Haiku- EPISODES 1-3

EPISODE 1

(H)Aiku – We never Die

Yes, we never die

We will live on forever

Lie, for we all must

 

EPISODE 2

IRONY OF LIFE

Leaves and shades of green

Cluster minds of the aged

Leaving bright rays here

 

EPISODE 3

forEVER is nEVER

Never ever will

The weather bring glad tidings

Forever we’ll wait



14 thoughts on “(H)Aiku/ Hi Coup/ High Coo/ Haiku- EPISODES 1-3” by Ayokunle Falomo (@aryor)

  1. Hmm…Yes, we’ll wait…

  2. @AYOKUNLE, OF COURSE WE WILL….LIKED THEM

  3. Haiku, that’s that Japanese poem writing style,right?

  4. Thank you guys. And yes @Scopeman, it is oh. Remember I told you I was writing a series based on it? This is it!

  5. @ayokunle, no com break our thinking skulls o!!!

  6. @Ayokunle Falomo, biko, cool down with the ‘this is it’ phrase o! Since one of our Uncle’s die, we don dey cool down with that term. :)
    Lovely poems. would suggest though that in the third line of the first poem, there should be an exclamation in place of the comma after Lie.
    I enjoyed the work. What is the story behind Haiku?
    Well done on all. The poems are simply, clear and interesting…

    1. You will pardon me for responding to this almost 2 years later @Sueddie. Thanks a lot! Your suggestion is right on point!

      1. @aryor: You know you didn’t say the story behind the Haiku, ja?
        or…
        do I have to wait another two years? :)

        1. @Sueddie Ha, no be so oh oga. There’s really no story behind it, was just trying to experiment with the form :)

  7. Ol’boy me I no wan wait forever o……..lol. Loved them all.

    Well done!!!

    1. Mr Lawal, @easylife2, this is coming really really late…but THANKS!

  8. I’m just reading this…I know I’m late,but I can’t help saying its a nice poem.

    1. Thank you @Mimiadebayo, I haven’t been on here in a long time. Thanks for bringing me out!

      1. Oh! So this is the way you even came out… @mimiadebayo , maybe we should commission you to go wake the dying embers of most of our members o…
        Hmm :)

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