Her Objective Mind

Her Objective Mind

Jennifer glanced around the lecture room she usually studied in and then at her wristwatch. It was 6.00pm,time to head home.

‘Hello!’

She looked up to see Kayode, a 300 level student she had a huge crush on.She smiled saying nothing.

‘Heading home?’

She eagerly nodded and stood up.

They chatted for some minutes while he dropped his books with his friends and then they walked around the campus talking- Jennifer didn’t want the night to end. His phone beeped and while he answered it,she checked her wristwatch and gasped-10.00pm!

She never stayed out this late on campus…then she remembered Kevin was with her…

‘I’m so sorry. I have to go now, my cousin who stays on campus is really ill and I need to take him to the hospital immediately. The gate is not far from here,can you manage? I have to go back this way…’

Jennifer nodded and swallowed.

‘I am so sorry.I will call you later tonight okay?’ he hugged her and disappeared in the opposite direction.

She looked around her and then quickly began to walk towards the gate.A few steps and she began to hear sounds in the bush nearby and within seconds,two guys rushed out of the bush,grabbed her and pulled her in.There was even no time to scream as a hand covered her mouth!

Four months before that day, the Vice Chancellor(VC) had banned students from studying in their hostels at night.He said reading was for classrooms and so every night a matronly woman went round the hostels to make sure the lights were out and no one was studying in their rooms. The girls complained about the lack of safety in the school premises and asked the Student Union President to pressure the school authorities to light up the campus streets and tighten security but the president returned with all sorts of excuses- no money for street lights, it was not their responsibility,it was expensive…clearly, the Student Union Executives had more important issues to pursue as it became apparent they were enjoying huge compensations.

True to the female students’ fears, stories of female students being mugged on their way to or from the lecture rooms and library at night began to filter in and by the end of the second month,it became alarming. Then one night a girl was raped and that put a new twist on things. The female students started to grumble but not even the guys took notice; then a few of them decided to go to the VC with their complaints only to be told by his secretary that the new law had since been accepted by the students represented by the President.

That was when Jennifer’s best friend,Seyi and some other concerned roommates decided to take to the streets-they would protest. They decided they wanted the Union Executive team out of office and the VC had to reverse his new directive until they could provide adequate security for them.

Jennifer read in the library sometimes but she was home before 6.00pm so she didn’t feel threatened by the law… it was for those living on campus. She knew there was a students union government voted into office but wasn’t all that for those socially inept nerds?

A few days after, Jennifer watched from the side lines; granted, there was good reason for the protests but… sighing, she walked in the opposite direction of her marching friends…

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5 thoughts on “Her Objective Mind” by molekor (@molekor)

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    Jaywriter (@jaywriter): Junior Writer - 1829 pts

    I love this story and the way it was told. Nice one.

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    King kObOkO (@): Newbie - 0 pts

    Yes! Political decisions &indecisions affect every one whether directly or indirectly. Thanks for warning us youths on the danger of political apathy with this story. The setting is especially easy to relate to too *winks* Though I must say that the flashback was almost confusing when we find a flash-forward in “Few days after” in the last paragraph.

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    Raymond (@raymond): Head Wordsmith - 47642 pts

    Umm…..Flashback didn’t work so well here…

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    Ellie (@elly): Writer - 9168 pts

    Flashbacks- fore-shadowing they are very risky to apply. I got the gist and i like that the story wasn’t too direct as in on the general elections and that the message was clear- stand up and take action, be it by protests or any other means…

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    Scopeman (@scopeman60): Head Wordsmith - 50499 pts

    Direct but a bit confusing with the flash backs and forwards. Also read like a factual journal somewhat, but even that is not necessarily inappropriate for the contest.

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