Just in case..

Just in case..

I see them flock around you. Svelte young beauties with bouncy pointed breasts. Board stomachs without scars. Thighs that are stretch mark free. Faces that are alien to the ravages of time. They flock around you despite the gray beard and the belly that i have nursed all these years. They are drawn by the wealth that is visible in your every nuance. In case you forget and somehow decide they are better than your wife of 27 years, remember all these.

In case you ever forget. And i know that it is possible that you will. We are human after all . Susceptible to amnesia – self-inflicted and sometimes through means we have no control over. Who knows if we shall escape that horror that is Alzheimer’s? Or the numerous accidents that can steal our memories and leave our pages blank? Memories are as vulnerable as our bodies. Who knows if tomorrow might bring seas of sorrow or despair, wealth or abundance to wash away all memories of all that i am to you?

In case you forget, the wrinkles on my face are from years of worrying about you those nights you stayed out late, those days you couldn’t face the dawn because of pain and despair, those times you were grieved in your spirit and unwilling to face whatever life had to offer. In case you forget, the laugh lines near my lips are from the joy you brought me over the years, the laughter you drew from my lips with your clumsy advances to win my heart, the clowning you engaged in to elicit a smile from my face when all other efforts had failed.

In case you forget, the stretch marks are from the four children i have borne you. The scar across my stomach from the last one that you so wanted to be a girl. I suckled and nourished them from the bowels of milk nature gifted me with. That should explain the sagging breasts.

In case you forget, i make the best jollof rice.its all you ever eat. It is your best meal and years of cooking it has made me into a plump woman and no more the svelte girl you met on the streets of Akoka. The cook must taste the meal first after all. If salad had been your favorite meal, it would be another story altogether.

In case you forget, my eyes are dimmer and i wear glasses because i cooked for five long years with firewood. You couldn’t afford better then. Now we have all the shiny stuff in the kitchen but back then i had the firewood, my hands, my lungs and my eyes to make your meals.

In case you forget, i love you. I have loved you for the best part of my life. I will never love again like this. Never like this.

Most of all,  in case you forgot, my father is still very good with his guns and my brother, the one that never liked you,is a major in the army now and he is acclaimed for being a sharp shooter.

Just in case you forget…



19 thoughts on “Just in case..” by Kiah (@kiah)

  1. This is good. Like your sense of humour as well. Your dad and brother oughtu to scare this man. Well, that’s what you get marrying the wrong person. Think will leave us till the next ‘path’? You grab shay? Lol. Good work though. Prosey poem or poemy prose?

  2. This sweet with a nice touch of humour. You are a brilliant writer Kiah, well done!

  3. Good stuff. have issues with the paragraphing/punctuation…but i like.
    Good stuff.

  4. I loved it…seems your a direct yet humorous writer. Well done!

  5. Roflmao! I love this. I really really do. The humor is killing. ‘. . . if salad had been your favorite meal . . .’ that nearly broke my ribs.
    Very lovely. I’m definitely saving this.

  6. Oh my God! I love this. Most especially:

    “Most of all, in case you forgot, my father is still very good with his guns and my brother, the one that never liked you,is a major in the army now and he is acclaimed for being a sharp shooter.”

    Kiah, you managed to send the message across in a funny way.

  7. waittttttttt,I need to show this to someone.

  8. saving immediately,really love this kiah and had to show it to someone that should see this.
    This was so coooool,you rock

  9. Lol, well told, Kiah! It’s a man’s world they say, and your story painted that picture perfectly. I chuckled but then it also got me thinking how much women really suffer, and they’re still expected to look perfect!

  10. Ditto Marya but this was also quite funny.
    Well done!

  11. i have no idea where this came from…i am just glad y’all had fun with it! Thank you folks!

  12. you cant beat the humour at the end.

    Well done kiah!!!

  13. totally hilarious! u really are a gifted writer

    1. Thank you dear…its been a while oh…how did you dig it up? :)

  14. well i checked out all your writings..the ones i had seen had me looking for more

  15. strong writing, I must say… very strong… you did well to write it and spit it all out, so keep it up… however I am still staring at so many typos and grammatical errors… keep writing… you have some thing in there.

  16. Whoaaaa!! This is really very intense.Talk about the sacrifices women make! And yet…

    1. tell me about them sacrifices..sigh..thanks for visiting…

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