Electronic Freedom

Electronic Freedom

She lost love at first sight, but married him nonetheless. On Facebook, she had fallen in love, with a profile picture of him holding a Nigerian flag in one hand and the other hand across his chest. And then she sent him a message, something about how his profile picture seemed like a symbol of hope, of a new dawn. She didn’t think he’d reply, given the myriad of comments that accompanied his updates, 150,000 on the average. But he replied. His reply ended with, “I’m coming to Ife for a function. Could we meet?” Half-excited, half-nervous, she replied, “Yes.”

And it was the same word she used when he asked her, in his hotel room, only meeting her in person for the first time, to marry him. She didn’t gasp, although she felt like gasping. She didn’t say ‘no,’ or ‘wait,’ or show surprise. She said yes. And she did not want to think that his face was older than how it looked on Facebook, or that at his age, 47, he was yet unmarried.

So when he became President, surprisingly, given the odds against him – he was from Southern Nigeria, and was from a new party – she became, of course, the First Lady.

She did not change her relationship status on Facebook. She left it the way it was, “In Progress.” By now, he was too involved with governance to update his status on Facebook, and so did not see how unchanged her relationship status was. Or that her status was usually a word.

Or that when he hit her for the first time, after she disagreed with his decision to appoint a man as Minister for Women Affairs, she updated her status to read “Hit.” Perhaps, because he did not see this, he hit her more, anytime she sounded or acted dissident. Dissidence to him meant more than one thing, as indefinable to her as to him.

Because her dissidence was indefinable, and because she was silent to his decisions as he was vociferous about them, she obliged when he asked her to wrap her hands around a pillar so that he could flog her. She had questioned his decision again. This time it was regarding the amount allocated for renovating their house. So he lashed her a dozen times, and for the second dozen, he stripped her blouse, and lashed her bare back.

And so, on the day he lashed her bare back, her status was “Bare.” It was September 30, 2010. Two hours later, her status became “Tomorrow.”

When tomorrow came, while he slept, at 1.00am, she took a rope, made it into a noose, and circled it around his head. Then she pulled it until it got to the pillar which she had held hours before. She circled the pillar with the rope, and kept circling, and circling.

Later, when the President was unavailable for his Independence Day broadcast, she updated her status, “Free.”

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23 thoughts on “Electronic Freedom” by Emmanuel-Iduma (@Emmanuel-Iduma)

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    Lade (@Lade-A): Scribe - 12448 pts

    WOW! This is amazing. Simply written yet so powerful.
    I could feel the MC’s emotions all through. And yes, i can totally relate this to Nigeria.
    Beautiful!

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    estrella (@estrella): Scribe - 16303 pts

    This is simply riveting! You managed to capture Nigeria’s love-hate affair with her leaders in such a profound yet short piece! You get my vote dude!

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    Seun-Odukoya (@Seun-Odukoya): Head Wordsmith - 103667 pts

    OKAY…I THINK THIS ONE IS KNOCKING IT NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!

    WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    You wanna know the best part??? The most memorable part(s) of this…?!?!?!??

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    Mazi Nwonwu (@Fredrick-chiagozie-Nwonwu): Scribe - 13440 pts

    My own story aside, Dude! I will be voting for you. This rocks.

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    RemiRoy (@RemiRoy): Writer - 8505 pts

    Wow! truly amazing, well done!

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    yetitweets (@yetunde): Junior Writer - 1216 pts

    wow!!!!! captivating! I love it! Well done!

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    Jefsaraurmax (@jefsaraurmax): Scribe - 13626 pts

    Emmanuel,this is a very powerful story and it can be read on different levels.Thumbs up!

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    inspire (@inspire): Beginner - 606 pts

    Wow. Fantastic. Well written and very symbolic. Makes you think.

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    abby (@abby): Junior Writer - 3496 pts

    Yes, very riveting tale; simple yet succinct.
    Well done!

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    Uche Okonkwo (@Uche): Writer - 8435 pts

    Very nice. I like!

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    Seun-Odukoya (@Seun-Odukoya): Head Wordsmith - 103667 pts

    AND YOU WON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    Scopeman (@scopeman60): Head Wordsmith - 50202 pts

    Congratulations man, you really did deserve this. Well done!

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    Mercy Ilevbare (@efearue): Junior Writer - 3077 pts

    Now I know why you won..Congratulations again..

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    Fabian (@fabage): Newbie - 121 pts

    The best part for me is the title. Befitting and thoughtful. Nice one

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    Kiah (@kiah): Head Wordsmith - 51653 pts

    Ohmigosh! Amazing tale! You do deserve to win!

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    Adekunmi Ayinde (@tmomo): Beginner - 937 pts

    Emmanuel, I never knew you were this good, good story

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    Joseph Omotayo (@strongself): Scribe - 13863 pts

    This story is off the roof!!!! I love it. You tried well not to muddle tenses up. And you did that exactly good. Well done man.

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    Lade (@Lade-A): Scribe - 12448 pts

    Congratulations! I’m very happy you won. This story is ‘A+’ in creativity.

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    Dr. Tansi Nigeria (@internetpope): Newbie - 264 pts

    Congrats Guy! I wanted to be the first to congratulate you but couldn’t. Men! I loved your write up, Sincerely.

    Congrats once again. You are the guy to beat.

    Happy Independence!

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    ibkinx (@): Newbie - 0 pts

    Damn!
    if you did not win i wonder who would have
    this is a very beautiful story with a cool title too.
    KEEP IT UP.
    I REALLY LIKE.

  21. I have a confession to make: THIS IS THE STORY THAT LED ME TO NAIJASTORIES. And I’ll always remember the day I first read it in the newspaper. What imagination! What inspiration! What an analogy to a disillusioned but hopeful nation! (Abi I go call am country? Ha ha!) WELLest done, dear Emmanuel! This sure deserves more prizes, especially from the Facebook team. *winks*

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    colotrends (@colotrends): Junior Writer - 1100 pts

    beautiful escape from hackneyed regulars, very creative and innovative as well. She reminds me of “A Poison Tree” by William Blake. Bottled in all her fury, sunned it and watered it and it grew by the day and then, she strikes!

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    Gboyega Otolorin (@guywriterer): Head Wordsmith - 49293 pts

    I like d concept of this. But what do u mean when u say her dissidence was indefinable?

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