It is very important for me to know the answer to the question “Am I a witch?”. Many people have accused me of a craft I only see in films that they call Nollywood. I am now locked up in a dark room filled with mosquitoes because of it. They said that if I failed to confess, they would give me the Onome treatment.
Ye! Yeee! That is death. That is death by fire. They burnt Onome alive in the presence of everybody because she did not say she was a witch. If my case comes to that, I will not be able to refuse to say it. But they will ask me to deliver those bewitched. Since I cannot do that, I will still burn, burn with fire.
My name is Bom Boy. That is the name people have been calling me since the day I began to differentiate between my right and left hands. I am a twelve years old boy. I live in the Uja. I hear it is a nice place to live in, but only a small part of its good side is known to me. The only time I felt good about it was when fellow students praised the quality of any of the hand me down items I took to school, whether a wrist-watch or a phone. I like the way they used to gather around me. That used to make me feel like a king.
Yes, for that short period I used to feel big because everybody would be around me trying to catch a glimpse of my Rolex watch and my camera phone that has a lot of Nigerian and American films. Even those with neater school uniform used to play the subjects to me then. But thought of the home where I get those items of joy used to take away the happiness.
At home, Daddy and Mummy called me a witch. I don’t know why they liked to call me a witch. I don’t know any spirit, evil or good. I have never painted my face in a scary way like the witches I see in Yoruba films. Even the white marks around the eyes of dibias of Nigerian Films only come to me from the films. Yet whenever something went wrong in the house, I would be accused of it. When the TV spoiled, I was the one. When somebody woke up with a headache, accusing fingers pointed at me.
At the beginning, they did not beat me. They started giving me expensive gifts like Rolex wrist-watch and a latest model of Nokia phone. Daddy told me he hoped they (the gifts) would “appease” me. I didn’t know the meaning of the word. The dictionary told me it was “to make some one less angry or to stop them from attacking you by giving them what they want”. I later told Daddy I was neither angry with him nor willing to attack him. He said that it did not matter. It was only my happiness they were after as good parents.
But they all turned against me the day Mummy had a bad dream. She started screaming my name from their bed room. When I saw her coming, I ran to the kitchen. She followed me. She slipped on the tiles of the kitchen. Daddy heard her crying for help. He chased me out side the house and across the road. I escaped a fast bus. He was not lucky. It catapulted him away.
I wanted to go and see how he was. Mummy shouted that I was a witch. She said that I wanted to finish Daddy. Some of the people that had gathered there ran toward me. I jumped in to an uncompleted building and I took a short cut to the school.
I was the first person to get to school that day. It was very cold that morning. The cold whether and the sound of different birds made me fear. I felt it was cold because a spirit, Daddy’s spirit was there in the school to punish me for my act of witch-craft. I used to hear people saying everything was cold when they saw the dead. But the spirit didn’t come. I didn’t see it.
The sounds of the birds were scary. Some of them sounded like the witches’ bird in Yoruba films. I felt they were trying to use the opportunity of my loneliness to initiate me in to their society. I could hear a pattern of the sound that sounded like KABO SE’EYE AYE, something like welcome in to the world assembly of witches. The sound continued. When I was about to run out of the school, some of my class mates and some older students started arriving.
The prefect in whose house I was asked me to go and sit down. He said I shouldn’t sweep. He collected my phone and said he wanted to use it to make yanga at a female student. After making the show of a big boy to the big female student, he gave me my phone, and I went in to the class. The school business was about to start.
Our first period was that of Mr. Kawu, the Mathematics teacher. He was a tall man with bad temper especially on the days he wore black dress. His dark complexion used to make him more terrible in the dress. Whenever he was angry, he never considered anything too much for punishment. One day he used koboko to beat a boy. The whip touched his left eye, and the next time we saw the boy, the eye had sunk.
So, when I saw Mr. kawu in black T-shirt and trousers, I was afraid and careful not to offend him. He warned us that he was angry on that day and was not going to tolerate any “irresponsible behaviour” from us. That was the name he used to call any offence: “irresponsible behaviour”.
As the lesson was going on, his phone rang. The ringing tone was like those tiny one that are in-built for such cheap phones. Some of the students, who had heard my phone singing Eedris Abdulkareem’s Mr. Lecturer, laughed at such a common tone coming from the Mathematics teacher’s phone. They looked at both the teacher and me alternately.
Mr. Kawu glared at me as if I was the one laughing. He nodded forcefully as if to say this is your last warning. I decided to switch off my phone so that I would avoid offending him through the ringing tone of my phone. As I pressed the button, a sonorous voice started bidding me farewell from the phone. I had stepped in to what I was trying to avoid. I tried to muffle the sound. It was too late. Mr. Kawu had heard it.
He called me to the front of the class, his hand clutching at a wire-bare doubled over cable. He asked me to lie down. I went flat on my chest with my hands covering my face. Since I felt my face secured, I decided to blank everything from my world expecting the merciless cable to start descending on me. For what seemed like a minute it didn’t come. Shout s came from fellow students. I thought one or all of them had committed another “irresponsible behaviour”. The postponement of punishment was not good for me. It was like the relaxation of a donkey with a heavy load behind it.
I looked up when I heard footsteps rushing out. Mr. Kawu stood where he was before I lied down. He stood like a soldier keeping watch over me, but he was shaking. The hand that held the cable stood in the air together with the cable. No, the cable was not in the air. Its tip was at the bare tips of some tangled wires above. He was getting elec.. electrocuted. At least that was the name they called it before locking me up.
Next week they said they would come and see if a week’s hunger will make me to leave witch-craft. If not, I will be like Onome. I don’t know whether I am a witch or not.
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Poor boy. The tone of the story sounds rather matured for a 12yr old in some parts but all in all, a good job. Welldone.
Hmmmm.. Interesting tale. I don’t think a boy can be called a ‘witch’ though. But could all those bad occurences be mere coincidences??? I am still wondering. Why will his parents appease him even when nothing mysterious had happened yet?.. Well done Abdulwasiu, this was quite interesting. Watch out for those annoying typos.
I think something’s already happened, which we weren’t told about. Since Bom Boy’s telling, he apparently doesn’t know about it as well. The boy should go and wash his head jare; those coincidences are tres much.
@Mercy, it’s possible that things may had already happened, but Bom Boy may not had known anything about them, because the parents may not have told him even though they may have ascribed the happenings to him. Remember, the story is told from his point of view.
good effort Abdulwasiu, your choice of topic is very good, i know its supposed to be a short story but is there more? cos it seems like there should be more.
sad sad ssad!why are his parents appeasing him?that means they know sth he doesn’t know,’coz the guy is innocent,wish I was him.
Nice story.
hmmmn…love the topic u picked to write on ‘child witches’ its some intense sturvs, although i think the story could have been told better, apart from the maturity of the 12yr old, the story has a lot of ideas like ur other stories, and yet those ideas dont seem well meshed in the story persay, nice story thou, but pls work on the original some more, i see this being used to to tell the a heart wrenching story one day, keep it up…
Yeah…the story reads quite mature for a 12yr old boy who lives in a rural area (i’m assuming that from the tone of the story and the threat of burning him)…but the story weaving of the details are too splendid.
All those events can be ascribed to fate…but it could also be true…Bomboy could actually be a witch…
INCREDIBLY DONE. Don’t stop.
I love the subject, and the telling was good too, except for some typos.
I do have one other issue i think you should look into, and that is the part where the teacher was electrocuted. I couldnt really visualise that part. Was the cable connected to an outlet or something? That area wasn’t well handled, to me. Maybe if there’s a sequel it could be explained better.
All the same, Well done.
@Uche, I think that the scene was entirely probable. There was a naked wire hanging from the ceiling; the teacher raised his cable and it hooked the cable in the ceiling, thus sending a current through him.
For me, what came through in the story is that sometimes, when entirely unfortunate coincidences occur in people’s lives, they are quick to attribute these things to external evil influences.
Nice story; poor boy. Pesky typos are like little foxes that spoil the vine; watch out for them.
Do take the comments and critiques above seriously. You remind me of Sade Fatorade; I wonder where she is.
Well done.
Ah… Sade Farotade. I think NS was specifically tailor-made for that chic. Yeah, I kept visualizin an older kid but the innocent tone tempered that a bit. Really nice…
… @Hassan, nice work, nice concept! Keep the ink flowing!
@Abdulwasiu, I absolutely loved the topic you chose and the point of view that you chose to use – the child who felt alone and confused by the reactions he evoked in people who thought he had a malign supernatural influence.
Yeah, there are typos – but I’m so impressed by the good in the story that I’m giving you 10 points. Great stuff!
@tolaO: 10points?! Don’t be cheap nah… Hike it up to a cool thousand. No carry Ijebu movement come NS oh! Hehe…
@ Abdulwasiu, I don’t know whether it was meant to be funny, but I found myself smiling and laughing up to the end. Love the effortless humour even in a story that is so touchingly sad. I understand the term boy-witch (can’t call him a wizard now, can we, lol) Loved the part about the electrocuted teacher
. In fact, very enjoyable story all round.
Good story.The story also got good potentials. Made me remember Matilda and Damien and the mutants in X-Men. Good work.
Friends, I am overwhelmed by your comments. Thank you all for taking the pains to read through the story. I have done a sequel to it. I hope it answers some of your questions. Once again, thank you all!!!!!!!
poor guy! help yourself by prays, ask God to help you by his serveing power and grace.
Nice story Wasiu. Found the language quite ‘halting’ at some points but it’s understood considering the POV.
I hope there’ should be more ‘cos like Meena said it’s quite a controversial and relevant topic.
well done!
good story
i just pity the poor boy.
very good effort here