TRUSTING YOU … My Trust!!!

TRUSTING YOU … My Trust!!!

My heart’s beating hard … yes, I know you can hear it too …

The blood is pumping hard … everyone can feel the pressure

My brain is working so hard … that’s why I’m writing this in the first place

These are just but a few ways to ascertain the way I feel for you!

I can lie for you … I can’t really count the number of time I’ve done so …

I can work for you … God only know how hard I will … just let me start …

I can stay awake for you … so many midnight calls can testify to that …

Everyone can see your tags on me … if only they know how to find it!

So many waters have passed through this body of mine

Immeasurable litres of bloods through my blood vessels … I just can’t measure …

How then can you know I’ve gone through so much for you … only God knows

When all that gives me pleasure is knowing that I trust you … no matter what!

But I love you my sweetone … that’s why I do this … all for you …

I adore you my adorable … what else could I have done …

I admire you my companion … everything about you …

And I trust you in every way … my heart … in ways … so much!

And I ask myself … does this make me stupid … though I hear rumours …

Does this make me a fool … though people tell me I’m out of my mind …

Does this make me so feeble … as feeble as can be …

I just reply them saying ‘My love, my life … in him I trust!’

I just don’t care what people say about you …

I don’t just give ears to words flying around …

I don’t want to know what they mean …

‘coz all they want is to bring pains … to this love so sweet.

We’ve passed through storms my dear …

We’ve passed through hard times … so what more can I be afraid of?

We’ve somersaulted over trying times … you know I’ve lost count!

How then can cupid’s arrow of love have the strength to destroy a mindset this strong? … hmm …

All I know is I love you my dear … I can repeat that a thousand times

I can’t stand not hearing from you my heart … guess I’ll die

Your trust keeps waxing stronger in my heart …

and as such, TRUSTING YOU is all I’m living for, MY TRUST!!!



47 thoughts on “TRUSTING YOU … My Trust!!!” by boomingsols (@boomingsols)

  1. That’s the writer boomingsols me’ve known since childhood, that’s about 23 years now. The poem’s is very good. I loved the soul and reality you poured into it. I like the way you moved from certainty to uncertainty. She’s sure but not too sure. Very feminine indeed. Great job. A little twist at the end would have had me asking for your hand in marriage for Anderson, our poetry genius. Very good one girl. Expecting more from where that came from.

    1. Lol, Jay, ask for her hand in marriage for someone else? Why not for yourself?

      1. dont mind this naughty man,i magine him turnng this place to date.com

        1. @Paul … he can’t do that … I Trust!

      2. @lade-a – You oughtu to know why now. Planning ask someone you know.

      3. @Lade … that will make him gay … so he wouldn’t have tried that …

    2. Lol @Jaywriter … tanx for the comment … I hope you’re happy now that this is better … And for @Anderson, our hands will be too tight for that … so don’t even start now! lol.

    3. @Jaywriter..you want to turn me into a polygamous man abi?
      how many wives you wan give me now.

      1. … are you really taking @Jaywriter seriously … nah … you know Jay is fond of writer what all JayWriters does …

        1. yes,i guess its just the writer in him that is being naughty.

          1. and that’s why he’s codenamed ‘JayWriter’!

  2. This is good. I noticed a few grammatical errors though:

    ‘God only know how hard I will…’
    ‘Immeasurable litres of bloods…’

    Bloomingsols, have you tried writing prose? I have a feeling you would do prose quite well. What do you think?

  3. @Uche, The ‘blood(s)’ was an absolute typo error … so sorry for that.
    And thanks for the note.

  4. I second that suggestion, you should also try prose. But don’t stop this either. You are creating a whole new prose-poetry style that i’m sure will become a huge success.
    Welldone @boomingsols.

    1. Thanks for the encouragements @Lade …

  5. Hmm …
    @Jaywriter, @Lade, @Uche … your encouragements are heartwarming … and your criticisms … very encouraging …
    I’ve noticed that I have a unique style of writing … which I can’t help conforming to … most times … Though, I go by convention sometimes to conform to norms …
    I just hope this can be adapted. Like @Jaywriter said … from certainty to uncertainty (I love that) …
    And Lade … thanks a bunch …

  6. I do agree with Lade on that, try writing prose…Its good for your style…

    Well, this is a nice write…Maybe this is your style…It might be better in time…

    1. thanks @treasured1, I see to that.

  7. Well done!! This I did enjoy reading…Read like poetry in some parts and like prose in others (like musing)..

    1. Hmmm … @Mercy Ilevbare, thanks … thanks … thanks … I’m still working on my writeups!

  8. You’re right, @Lade. Actually, this new creation of @boomingsols is uniquely hers, her own special trademark, awkward as it is to me. Even the plotless story in Ernest Hemmingway’s book THE OLD MAN & THE SEA was eventually published after such a long time, and that was also a huge success at the time it is. @Jaywriter, oga matchmaker, u try well well o! I believe by the time the solemnisation clicks, u go be d priest presiding abi? :D :D Shege! :D

    You know, @boomingsols, there is a way you’ll stay in the midst of writers of all ages, writing would no longer be a hobby to you as time goes on. It is something for life. Associations with writers improves one, and I say this out of experience, my dear.

    I’m beginning to enjoy your trademark of writing, dearest, and I really look forward to reading more of you on paperback. :) *Thumbs up*

  9. Well done lady; I echo the praises, criticisms, corrections and advises given. It definitely is your style and that makes it you.

    1. @abby … thanks for seeing that too!

  10. Like this ur style oh,please keep them coming,u hear.
    Don’t accept any proposal for Anderson if you still want to remain in Abby’s good books,lolz

    1. Hmmmmmmm gretel,what are you implying now.
      just wait let aunty Abby catch you first.

      1. what did I do now?I don’t know what you’re talking about oh.

        1. you only know what you are thinking,i wont help you.

          1. serzly,what d’ya mean?
            Mtchewwww

            1. @gretel … no lele o … lol … Abegi … take it easy o …

            2. why the beef now … abeg … seems we need attention here … lol

          2. @Paul … what do you think @gretel is thinking … hhun?

        1. i think she wants to hook up with me instead of you.lol
          wont that be cool.

          1. @Paul … lol … think we’ve got to start a NS hook-up page o … or what do you think?

    2. thanks @gretel … your words … sure melts my herat … thanks once again …

  11. Poetry + prose- Nicely done…
    Watch out for the typos, well done.

    1. @Elly Turtoe … hmmm … ‘Poetry + Prose’ … u’ll be surprised how I’ll write a pure Poetry and Prose one of these days … to your amazement!
      Thanks all the same!

  12. @boomingsols: hope you’ll remember us in thy kingdom when you make headlines for creating ‘poetrose’. We had your back oh!
    But way to go sha. See how you converted your critics one time! *palm up* Gimme five!

    1. Lol, Cikko. Trust you to come up with a term for boomingsols writing style. ‘Poetrose’ indeed. But it fits.

      1. @lade-a: you know how I do nah. Lolz…

      2. @Lade … @cikko907 … sure trips me with that o

    2. @cikko907 … thanks for the name ‘poetrose’ … you guy won’t just stop making me write sa … Cikko907, really I’ve got you to thabk for that ‘style name’ … lets see sa …
      @Lade, it really does fit … really …
      Thanks so much!

  13. truly you have a unique style and i love it.
    your poetry is real cool.
    keep them coming.

  14. @Anderson … my NS accomplice, I’ll say thanks for all your criticisms that have made me better …

  15. ‘Poetrose’ fantastic name for this unique style, this one seemed more natural,almost seemless, love this work girl! keep it up!

    1. @Meena-Adekoya, hmmm … thanks for your comment … I’m sure going to add it to the literary world one of these days.
      Thanks once again!

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