The Wind-my Battle

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Jul 272010
 

Standing on the edge of this cliff

Felt like I was a lone leaf

Ready to be blown away by the wind

Although different, still like a swing

At the peak of this mountain

My fear, I am unable to contain

Rooted to the ground

Never heard a sound

Oh the wind welcomes me

Informs me he has taken lead and took me in

Ready to throw me to my end

Whilst I am not able to defend

He is not my friend I tell you

As I am reminded of bad times in June

But then I fall off the cliff of my own volition

And all I feel is complete elation

This time, completely in agreement with the wind

Making it easier for me to yield

Then I feel bliss.

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  9 Responses to “The Wind-my Battle”

  1. Avatar of abby

    smile

  2. Avatar of Mercy Ilevbare

    bliss in death?? Haba! Chacha what happened to love?…Now this is different, enjoyed it girl!

  3. Avatar of Lade

    Hmmn! Reminds me of the eagle. It is by surrendering to the wind that it flies. Very deep.
    Another different one, 2cute.

  4. Avatar of Amurawaiye Adeyinka

    yes, there is bliss in death, the beautiful death

  5. Avatar of treasured1

    mmmhmmm..the beautiful freedom of letting go of all things but not dying for nothing….A lovely one here…its better to finish up in life than wait for the bliss unknown….

  6. Avatar of Jaywriter

    2cute is super woman. Good stuff. More like Nicholas cage in City of Angels right before he falls off the building and before he jumps into the ocean.

  7. Avatar of Anderson Paul

    very good stuff.
    could be interpreted differently.
    well done

  8. Avatar of Scopeman

    I’d only jump off a cliff if I have a parachute on, lol…
    Well done 2cute4u!

  9. Avatar of 2cute4u

    @Abby… Oh I’m smiling alright..

    @Thank you everyone!
    Decided to write differently here..

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