Every Wrinkle is a Story Posted by pyneapples 242 views Editor's Picks, Fiction, Fresh Start May 132010 You must be logged in to access this page.Comments comments pyneapples @pyneapples writer, screenwriter, artist and future martial artist (when I stop having migraines)... Go to pyneapples's profile, and read more of his/her posts. 27 Responses to “Every Wrinkle is a Story” Beautiful @ (Newbie - 145 pts) says: May 13, 2010 at 9:16 am wow!!! nice one! Log in to Reply Mazi Nwonwu @ (Scribe - 10419 pts) says: May 14, 2010 at 6:26 am Nice one, I enjoyed this. This one of those perfect cliffhangers. Log in to Reply Adeyinka @ (Newbie - 0 pts) says: May 14, 2010 at 9:59 am Touching end to the story Log in to Reply Maid @ (Newbie - 150 pts) says: May 15, 2010 at 5:21 am Well written, great begining and definitely a great ending. You write well. Good good job! Log in to Reply Dekky @ (Beginner - 993 pts) says: May 15, 2010 at 9:06 am Wow..kept me hanging. Nice Job. Log in to Reply Tola Odejayi @ (Senior Scribe - 29805 pts) says: May 15, 2010 at 3:04 pm Very good… funny and touching at once! Log in to Reply estrella @ (Scribe - 15343 pts) says: May 17, 2010 at 7:32 am Love the cantekerous man in the story! you write so well i was disappointed it ended so quickly…beautiful! Log in to Reply pyneapples @ (Newbie - 0 pts) says: May 17, 2010 at 8:35 am thanks everyone. Log in to Reply RemiRoy @ (Writer - 7253 pts) says: May 17, 2010 at 8:51 am ha! i like it o. ‘specially the headache inducing grammar! Log in to Reply Martin @ (Newbie - 0 pts) says: May 18, 2010 at 4:15 am Beautiful piece…had me holdin my ribs to make sure dey dint crack at first then quickly sobered me up wt d denouement. Wonder what inspired this… Log in to Reply pyneapples @ (Newbie - 0 pts) says: May 18, 2010 at 8:55 am thanks. i was inspired by someone i met briefly many years ago. Log in to Reply abby @ (Junior Writer - 3295 pts) says: May 21, 2010 at 5:37 am A sad ending indeed; sobered me up. Nice work! Log in to Reply Lade @ (Scribe - 10652 pts) says: May 21, 2010 at 6:45 am This is so nice and so touching. That end took me by surprise. Log in to Reply Anderson Paul @ (Senior Scribe - 23640 pts) says: May 22, 2010 at 10:02 am funny man and a strange mother…pity him though. what tragedies can do to a man.. Log in to Reply Ugo Chime @ (Junior Writer - 3643 pts) says: May 26, 2010 at 1:24 am very nice! @ d point u introduced d old woman, i began wondering if she a ghost, esp wen she said d stuff abt d man. very good. p.s: y did u make d grammar-blowing man a professor na? isn’t dat a cliche? & incorrectly so, at dat. Log in to Reply Afronuts @ (Wordsmith - 39357 pts) says: May 28, 2010 at 2:18 am This is a nice story but I suspect this must be an initial draft. I’m sure if you looked at itagain and again, you might be able to make it better. The intense begining, the humourous references and the touching end with a twist are the power of this story but I know that if you took time to look at it and make some changes you’ll make an unforgetable piece. There are some parts that seemed detached but could be better. Overall, I like the story, the humor and the touching twist! Log in to Reply Diva Divine @ (Junior Writer - 1277 pts) says: June 2, 2010 at 8:01 am nice one Pyneapples..keep it up Log in to Reply ediye @ (Newbie - 0 pts) says: June 8, 2010 at 8:56 am wow!…wht a story!..poor old woman.. Log in to Reply Mercy Ilevbare @ (Junior Writer - 2713 pts) says: June 24, 2010 at 5:28 am Mama Andy’s only son…how sad.. lovely, poignant and precise..good job pyneapples. Log in to Reply Lawal Opeyemi Isaac @ (Scribe - 10113 pts) says: July 6, 2010 at 5:35 pm For me,how the story worked itself to the title is what really knocked me off.Very good one! Log in to Reply doubleespresso @ (Scribe - 14831 pts) says: May 19, 2011 at 9:47 am Great flow, excellent detailing, well told! Log in to Reply barbara @ (Beginner - 723 pts) says: June 1, 2011 at 5:54 am I didn’t want it to end, very interesting. Log in to Reply jlde @ (Beginner - 858 pts) says: June 1, 2011 at 6:49 am hum…its an effluvium of revelation…reminds me of our own naija…nice piece. Log in to Reply Kiah @ (Head Wordsmith - 49980 pts) says: June 1, 2011 at 7:42 am Well done..this was well written!!! Log in to Reply aghoghosam @ (Writer - 6760 pts) says: March 1, 2012 at 5:25 am Just saw this story on the anthology list , congratulations , you deserve it Log in to Reply Bubbllinna @ (Head Wordsmith - 121605 pts) says: March 1, 2012 at 3:17 pm I love this story because it was fun to read with all em big words and the characters innit…U deserve it, Ur story deserves that place on the anthology list..Congrats.. Log in to Reply Ono-Edosio @ (Junior Writer - 2345 pts) says: March 3, 2012 at 2:00 am sad tale…. Log in to Reply Leave a Reply Cancel reply You must be logged in to post a comment.